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27 June 2009 @ 05:27 pm
My first JE fanfic~  
Title: Simplicity (why? I... don't really know)
Author: Me~~~~ j_4ever
Genre: mm... fluff and cheese, I suppose
Rating: PG
Fandom/Pairing: Arashi; Sho/Nino (OF COURSE! My current obsession~ :D)
Summary: Sho tries to sort out his thoughts about Nino (and fails)
Notes: Finally, the time has come for me to write my first JE fanfic!!!! :DDDD
I've always had tons of ideas floating in my head (I'm quite the daydreamer XD) but I was always too lazy to put them on paper; or err, computer ^^''
Disclaimer: It is my first fic so, um lots of fail? XD I would love to have feedback though! :) Oh yea, the boys don't belong to me.

     Sometimes Sho thinks Nino might be an angel. That might sound a bit cheesy, but when the spotlights shine down on Nino and he grins, eyes sparkling and he glitters; Sho thinks he can see wings on Nino’s back. They’re magnificent wings; big, bold and so, so, so beautiful that Sho can’t bear it and he has to close his eyes. Once he opens them the wings have disappeared and all he sees is Jun staring at him with a confused expression and Nino off to the other side of the stage, waving to the fans.

     Sometimes Sho thinks his mind must love to torment him. When Nino hops onto the wall that runs alongside the beach and walks with his hands outstretched; all Sho can think of is Nino falling, falling, falling and him being lost forever and it scares him. Scares him so much that he reaches out to Nino, hoping to bring him down, but this is Nino and all he does is laugh and says “you’re such a worrywart” and “I’ll be fine” and walks ahead with a smile; leaving Sho anxious, frustrated and what the heck’s wrong with me?

     Sometimes Sho can’t understand his feelings towards Nino. He can smile with Nino, laugh with Nino, talk with Nino – until he suddenly, like an electric shock, becomes aware of Nino and his proximity, his smile, his touch, his breath and – it gets too much. Sho has to breathe and tell himself that this was Nino, his best friend and –

     “Sho-chan?”

     Sho stops his tirade of thoughts and looks up from the floor he had been staring at. He sees Nino, the object of his inner turmoil, and tenses. Vaguely, Sho notices that Nino seemed different. He still had that grin on his face but his eyes betrayed how nervous he really felt. Sho wonders what could be making Nino so anxious. Nino rarely ever got nervous; Sho would know because he’d been with Nino too long not to know and this was strange –

     “I love you.”

     Sho stares.
 
     Nino shuffles over shyly and, taking a determined breath, kisses him.

     Sho’s brain is working overdrive; questions running over and over in his head, the what could this means and the what’s going ons and the whys and the hows and how could hes and does he reallys until everything clicks and all the confusion he had felt about Nino washes away like the waves on a beach. Sho kisses Nino back with as much feeling he could give and Nino smiles. Something warm and light spreads throughout Sho’s chest and he hasn’t felt this happy in a long, long time.

     Nino breaks off the kiss and the grin he gives Sho is the brightest, most brilliant Sho has ever seen it and he was now absolutely sure that Nino was an angel. He could see the wings (big, bold and so, so, so beautiful) shining in Nino’s eyes.

Feedback = ♥
x-posted
 
 
Current Mood: anxious
 
 
( 18 comments — Post a new comment )
kittypyon: BFFS[info]kittypyon on June 28th, 2009 03:32 am (UTC)
For your first JE fanfic, this was very good! :D
It's cute and sweet! I love it! ^^
Nice job! ;)
j_4ever[info]j_4ever on June 28th, 2009 04:38 am (UTC)
thank you~~~~ ♥ :)
Ferin: arashi: sakumiya dance[info]nicefinalbeam on June 28th, 2009 03:59 am (UTC)
all Sho can think of is Nino falling, falling, falling and him being lost forever and it scares him

I can see that being exactly Sho's concern.

This is really, really beautiful structurally. Very simple and sweet, with vivid imagery. Thanks for sharing. ♥
j_4ever[info]j_4ever on June 28th, 2009 04:39 am (UTC)
ASDFGHJKKLL;; to get such a sweet comment from you! (I'm such a huge fan of your works!) ASDDFGGHJJKKL; THANK YOU 8D

*ahem* friends? yes? 8D
batrisya_85[info]batrisya_85 on June 28th, 2009 04:02 am (UTC)
yeah.. it's cute and sweet~ you didn't drag any unimportant scene too.. which is again, good! thanks! <3

i'm sure Sho's happy when Nino kissed him.. that's enough for me :) Sakumiya rabu!!
j_4ever[info]j_4ever on June 28th, 2009 04:40 am (UTC)
thanks for your nice comment :)

Yea, I'm sure Sho loved it too~ yay! Sakumiya!
Moriah: Arashi- Sakumiya Rabu[info]all4cyanide on June 28th, 2009 04:04 am (UTC)
Anyone who writes Sakumiya is FABULOUS in my book! This was really very cute and fluffy. Very good for your first fic! Thanks for sharing!
j_4ever[info]j_4ever on June 28th, 2009 04:42 am (UTC)
LOL yeah, there needs to be more Sakumiya love! even though I don't have a Sakumiya icon...

thanks for your comment! I'm glad you liked it :)
雪娘: Sakumiya is ♥[info]rukiko_chan on June 28th, 2009 04:35 am (UTC)
So sweet, so cute, so beautifully written.
I love it ♥

great job!~
j_4ever[info]j_4ever on June 28th, 2009 04:42 am (UTC)
thank you very much! I'll do my best to write more! though it's not guaranteed XD
daffytan: SakuSho (3)[info]daffytan on June 28th, 2009 12:00 pm (UTC)
aww so sweet and so full of fluff :D
I love it (probably a bias comment coz I am a huge Sakumiya fan.) Nevertheless, very nicely written. Hope to read more 8D
j_4ever[info]j_4ever on June 28th, 2009 06:53 pm (UTC)
:DDDDDDDD
thank you~! Don't worry, I wrote this because I was a biased Sakumiya fan :D

(wanna be friends? Sakumiya unite? 8D)
daffytan: SakuSho (2)[info]daffytan on June 30th, 2009 07:26 am (UTC)
friends? MY PLEASURE~!
XD
I hardly know where and whom to fangirl with. Dont mind me adding you ;)
j_4ever[info]j_4ever on June 30th, 2009 10:42 pm (UTC)
:DDDDDD WELCOME! :D

yay, someone I can fangirl with :3 (and who loves Sakumiya :D *+10000000000000 points for you* I'm so happy :3
Frksofa[info]frksofa on June 29th, 2009 12:58 am (UTC)
Ooh, just.. very well written ^^ and so not fail:) I liked it: D
j_4ever[info]j_4ever on June 29th, 2009 09:38 pm (UTC)
thank you so much :)
Caroline Wong[info]calerine on July 8th, 2009 09:47 pm (UTC)
AHHH! So wonderful~! I'm... A bit lateXD But <3 this! I never knew ShoxNino could be so wonderful!

Cheese?XD
j_4ever[info]j_4ever on July 9th, 2009 03:29 am (UTC)
:DDDDD YOU HAVE BEEN MISSING OUT ON THE LOVE THAT IS SHOXNINO.

it's an addiction that you'll never get out of!!!!! muahahahahahaha! >D

YES PLEASE! :D
 
 

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